First Draft - Unfinished film opening + audience feedback

when our first draft deadline was due, we uploaded it onto social networking websites such as YouTube and Facebook in order to recieve responses as part of our audience feedback. This way, we would know what to edit, develop and change. Furthermore, at this point we hadn't thought of a clear ending, so this would give us an opportunity to gather ideas from others in order to make it look the best we could.

Audience Feedback

The responses we recieved were pretty positive, which we were more than pleased about. My very good friend Islah Rahman is studying and practising in the media, therefore was able to give me back constructive critisism which i took into consideration for our final edit.

We also received feedback from our peers, which we hoped would give us an insight of what we could change or add to improve our final film sequence.

The summary of Alex's response was:

"the music worked well"

"the final cut into the title was really good and builds suspense for the continuation of the rest of the film.  We want to know what happens next"

"It was really good, I enjoyed it"